sábado, 2 de novembro de 2024

Visita



no dia de
finados ele foi
ao cemitério
porque era o único
lugar do mundo onde
podia estar
perto do filho mas
diante daquele
bloco negro
de pedra
impenetrável
entendeu
que nunca mais
poderia alcançá-lo

Então
apanhou do chão um
pedaço amarrotado
de papel escreveu
eu te amo filho
pôs em cima do
mármore sob uma
flor
e saiu
soluçando

Autor : Ferreira Gullar
Imagem : Pinterest

3 comentários:

" R y k @ r d o " disse...

Bom dia:- Emocionante.
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Feliz fim de semana., em paz e amor.
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“” JUVENTUDE E VELHICE ““
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MELODY JACOB disse...

This poignant piece powerfully encapsulates the raw emotion of grief and loss. The imagery of visiting a cemetery on All Souls' Day, the solemnity of the "black block of stone," and the heartbreaking realization that one can never truly reach their loved one again all evoke a deep sense of sorrow. The act of writing "I love you son" on a crumpled piece of paper and placing it under a flower is both tender and devastating, illustrating the longing for connection that persists even after death.

The simplicity of the language enhances the emotional weight of the moment, allowing readers to feel the depth of the parent's love and the ache of separation. This piece serves as a touching reminder of the enduring bonds we hold with those we've lost, even as we grapple with the pain of their absence.

I just shared a new post; you are invited to read. Happy weekend!

brancas nuvens negras disse...

Sempre chocante perder um filho.